Alethics day

Hi, today for Writing we had to write down a descriptive piece of writing about athletics day!

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this will be a work about my Alethics day from yesterday on the 20th of november 2015.It going to tell you what happen

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WOHHH it  was a day that we had fun.On a day that people had Athletics day .It was the hottest day to have a run and make some music.

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On the 20th of november it was the scariest day of my life we had to run in front of people.It was very sacring my Hreat was pounding as fast as it could.

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I could feel the breeze coming to me as i was sitting down in the sun.

It was very cool to see people running their Hardest.It felt like i was in the semei finals.I can feel the bight sun going to my skin and making it bright like the light colour Yellow

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I could hear birds up in the trees because they want some of the people’s food.I heard that some people made it to the finals and some people did not.It is going to be exticed if I was in the finals or my friends.

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I could see parents going and cheering for their kids and bringing them some food.I could see people running like a cheetah.I could see the wind blowing past my face while I was looking at people running.

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I could Taste the nice air coming to my face and making me cold.I could taste the breeze coming paste me when I was running with some people.I could taste the hummy food that came throw my mouth when i was eating my food.

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I could smell the fresh air the came throw my nose and then went back in.I could smell the fresh air going when I was running.I could smell nice food as I walked past lot's of Whanau's