Today for Writing in Room 9 we are reading an article that you can find from NZ Herald,Waatea News and Kiwi Kids news to find information on Pollutions and on Kiwi Kids News I found Information about the Ganges river that started pollution in the northern side of India of Bangladesh.What I have found challenging was trying to find information in one of the sites that we had to look for.What was really enjoying was knowing how the pollution got there since the Ganges river use to be so beautiful.WALT:We are learning to find information on 3 websites about pollutions.
INFORMATION REPORT WRITING PLAN:
Pollution
Title
| Ganges river pollution increases |
Introduction:What are the big ideas in this report?
Opening Statement (no more than one sentence)
Brief description about about the key ideas in this report.
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Pollution is a type of dangerous thing that can affect people's lives.
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Paragraph One
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In ganges River was one of the greatest rivers on Earth but today it is starting to die from the icy Himalayan peak where it all begins but right down to the Bengal of Bay it was just being slowly poisoned.
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Paragraph Two
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The Pollutions from the factory and the farm is turning into Water Toxic In Ganges they respect india but it is also the sewer that carries away the waste.
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Paragraph Three
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In this Time Ganges has the most polluted river in the world because everything's been leading into the rivers of Ganges which is making it hard for people to clean out the sewage and all the dirt to make it clean.
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Diagrams supported with information
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Conclusion
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So now you know what to do if you just dump rubbish on the ground just because it can make a lot of pollutants that can turn people into hoarders.
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Use these sentence starters to help shape your ideas:
- Ganges is the most polluted because how the dirty water comes inside with a smellie sense of smell
Words that I may not know what is the meaning!
Word
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Meaning
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Ganges
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It is a river to the northern indian and bangladesh
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Toxic
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It is to describe a person who is tainted by an subconscious malevolence
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Sense
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an ability to understand and recognize a sense of smell.
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