Summer Learning Journey!
Bonus Activity!
Greetings and welcome back to my blog.
So in this activity it will be a bonus point activity worth about 20 points which is a lot and I can't wait to start it.In WWII both men and women had served in WWII and may women chose to enlist as a nurse and be stationed overseas to car for the wounded soldiers.So for this activity we had to imagine that we are just like Dorothy and that we
are working as a nurse on a large medical ship.
We had to complete the story provided above.
What happens next?
So for this task we have to write a story using this story then we had to complete it by writing down the story to get the full points.
Here is my story.
One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you just fall down into the floor with no clue with what is happening.Lots of tries came out of my eyes when I had seen how badly they had looked like when people got hurt.
Rest in peace to the soldiers who fighted and passed away for there country.
Here is my story.
One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you just fall down into the floor with no clue with what is happening.Lots of tries came out of my eyes when I had seen how badly they had looked like when people got hurt.
Rest in peace to the soldiers who fighted and passed away for there country.
-Enjoy Reading what I have wrote down.
IALT: imagine about me going to WWII to be a nurse and write down a story about it.
2 comments:
Kia ora Aletheia,
Me again! :0)
For this activity you are required to complete the story provided below:
"One day you are walking along the deck of the ship when you hear a loud bang. You start to run as you see smoke coming from the far end of the ship. You run towards the room where your patients are waiting to receive treatment from the doctor. Just as you arrive at the door to their room you hear another loud bang and you…"
In your post you story goes like this:
"So I am so excited to be in the WWII to help out the men needed.I feel nervous and sad that these men have to deal with getting hurt.There had been a big BANG that went don't on the floor which had flooded lots of people in one spot.I felt so sad so I had rushed and helped them out to get better but half of the men died from get hurt so badly by the boom that had hit them.
Lots of tries came out my eyes when I had seen how badly they had looked like when they got hurt.Rest in peace to the soldiers who fighted and passed away for there country."
Your story doesn't quite fit in as the continuation of the story from the activity. You can use some part of it, however, you will need to adjust so your story fits in perfectly with the story from the activity. In order for you to gain full points for this task could you try do that and let me know?
You can do this! Dig in and keep blogging!
Kia kaha,
Patricia
Greetings there Patricia,
I have might of forgotten to do so and will fix it.
Thanks for the comment.
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